the WIP–chapter two

Okay, here’s a bit more.  Feel free to tell me what you think of these characters (from the first scene, too).  Do you like them? What sort of sense do you get about them? Would you want to spend an entire book with them?  Hmm?  Chapter Two“I know I’m late and...

the WIP–chapter two

Okay, here’s a bit more.  Feel free to tell me what you think of these characters (from the first scene, too).  Do you like them? What sort of sense do you get about them? Would you want to spend an entire book with them?  Hmm?  Chapter Two“I know I’m late and...

The work in progress–a small sample

This isn’t completely finished, but here’s a small taste of the book in progress, a novel called THE OFFERING.  Comments are welcome. 🙂 Chapter One Marilee and I were trying to decide whether we should braid her hair or wear it in pigtails when Gideon...